Making Memories of Us

by Italian Stallion   May 23, 2007


Holding hands, cuddling close,
Whispers of "I love you"
Kisses and hugs follow too,
While sitting out on the coast.

Sharing this view with you,
Is absolutely breathtaking.
I couldn't ask for anything more,
For my heart is simply aching.

Making memories of us
Is what we're doing now,
As we sit and discuss
Our soon to be wedding vows.

*Written for a contest*

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I loved the title first off. It made me want to read more. Although the first stanza didn't quite catch my eye, after reading it began to get better and better. The last stanza caught me by suprise with the wedding vows. A lovely suprise though.

    Your flow was smooth and your emotions were deep yet right to the point. Great job Joe. 5.5

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    This is absolutely beautiful. I remember when I felt that way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Awwwww..it was a nice poem full of warm fuzzies. The flow was good and I liked how you described the happy feeling of being in love and spending time with that special person. Great job and keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by In Love Gurl

    It's beautiful. Are you getting married? If so, good luck! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I loved the flow. I give it a 5/5.

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