Something Like "Unbelievable Tramp"

by SomewhereAmongThePieces   May 23, 2007


When all you need is love
All you get is hate
And you just want someone to listen
But we all know it’s too late
You’ve destroyed your reputation
And no one cares to see
That change is always possible
They’re the impossibility
Have you heard the rumours spinning around?
You should, they’re all about you
The way you dress and the way you sound
And how you do your make-up too
The way you let your hair fall down
It’s sickening, can’t you tell?
You’re a seductive w.h.ore of course
And you can light that cigarette when you burn in h.e.ll
Apparently you’ve been sleeping around
And you might be pregnant too
These rumours are juicy and they astound
Does it even matter that they aren’t true?
You would do anything just to drop out
But you know that’s not allowed
You’ll beg your parents to let you transfer
But your parents are both too proud
They say that highschool is simply rough
And you just have to stick it out
I guess you’re not as strong as most
If this is what life is about
You’re slowly dying inside
This is not what you want to be
You’re thrashing around trying to escape
And that desperate you… is me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I thought this was a venting poem with a very nice rhythm at first The ending was the hook that makes this poem stand out from the rest. The middle really reminded me of a venting poem I wrote about someone that I thought rejected me I think you did a great job with this unusual poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    This is sad but also really good.i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Smilesunshine

    1. good poems
    2. dont transfer schools i love you
    3. F.u.c.k what people think about you cuz i know the truth your AMAZING
    4. I love you forever
    5. I never have or never will hate you

    BEST FRIENDS FOREVER

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats so sad but its really good. you have a lot of emotions in it. i hope it all goes ok for you xxxxxxxxxx

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