Dearest Heart: Part 2

by xPerfect Chaosx   May 24, 2007


----STOP!!!!----- If you have not read part 1, please go back and read that one before you read this poem!! Thank you!!!

Dearest Mind,

I understand your pleas and I know you wouldn't ask unless it was completely necessary, but I'm afraid I must deny your request. Not because of you, or because I don't want to. It's simply because I can't. I cannot stop the pain or plug the hole. It is simply to big. It is however, not for lack of trying. I've tried everything I could think, but alas, none of it worked. I regret to tell you, the only true healer is time.

I'm sorry,
The Heart

Thank you for reading, please let me know what you think and I hope you enjoyed it!! Thanks!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    I like this piece. the flow was very good. alot of emotion put into it. well done. 5/5!!!!!!!

    ~Chelsea~

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    For some reasons, I find this second part of the series much better than the first piece. Perhaps the flow was quite rhythmic and/or fluid throughout. I love the tone of voice of the subject (the heart)--soft, tender, and affectionate. On the other hand, it is delicate and fragile, nonetheless. The fact that you applied the subject's attributes into its tone of voice is quite charming. I'm enchanted! Debbie

    "It is simply to big." (sic) (= Too was misspelled in the line.)

  • 16 years ago

    by George

    Oh my god...its only the second one and I am crying...this is perfect! I dont know what to say about it...if the rest get any better I might just die a happy man!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This one was just as ggod as the ifrst one, I didn't see it coming this way at all. perfect word choice, deep emtion, I am on my way to read other parts now, really this has me intrested, I couldn't stop here if I wanted too. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow..i like this one too! at first, to be honest i thought it was all gonna be the mind in denial, [quite boring] but the message at the end, gave the poem some light...didnt expect it coming, so the even more better =] xx

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