Very nice flow in this poem. The only thing lacking is a passionate point, but I am too old to attract fantasy, yet not too old to romanticize. So I can't be overly critical

This is an excellent poem, I thought the first stanza was perfect and I was hooked after I read it. The flow was great and the imagery was aswell. Fantastic job 5/5

Your words were really amazing, i found your vocab to be quite strong which is what i always look for in a poem. Your topic was quite interesting, i loved it alot bcause ive never read a poem on this so you made a poem that was not cliche or already done too many times. Which is a definite bonus. Well done enjoyable read. 5/5~mel

Interesting subject. ;] Haha. It flowed really well, and was definitely interesting to read. Keep up the good work, you're talented.

I love this, it really makes me think and want to read it again because of the way it just uses words not always used in poetry so only people that can understand these words can really understand this poem...great flow...5/5!

I like the rhythm. The story2! Very Good

It may not be your best but that poem is probably something that people will be able to relate to.. if someone was sitting in that chair they will probably understand.. its a good poem then again there isn't about it that I would change anyway .. good job and keep up hte work.. 5/5

Hmm..
Nope this isnt your best.
But the subject is something that many people do. If you went into a little more detail.. well i probably wouldnt of read on.. Ok well the first stnaza you write "danger and elegance" these two words dont seem to acctually go togerther. This intrests the reader. You carried on by using alliteration; "sweet smell". ANyways this entire poem you can kinda imagine this kinda flirting going on. Its kinda sweet. I liked your vocabulary used in the poem. Overall not a terrible poem but not brilliant either. Keep writing. xx

Its nicely written n the fantasy is really there in the poem...he he.. lol. great 5/5.
with love
Fsams

Nice poem! i like the word "romantisized" used in your poem!
peace

I loved it!
I will be honest,
your spelling was falwless, the flow was perfect, the wording was creative.
You have talent, keep it up
xxxxx
love Tara-Kay

You may have sad not one of your best, but to me it was very good, just good enough to stay out if exlicit, it was blunt and thats good, details sometimes drown the message, good job

I really did like this piece because it gave the girl alot more emotion and you displayed the images of her imagination well. the flow was great the use of description was very well done all a ll this was a great poem keep up the good work. PLot121

I really liked this one. good job.

A rather good poem. and obviously not your best XD anyway flow was smooth I like the way you describe the girl! well done. Good choice of words! 5/5 as always

Nice image of words. and idea was good. dlow of words was also understandable. it was nice work you have talnet take care

Very good work
i liked the imagery
i could picture it all
nicely done
i loved it
it was amazing