Dear Dad

by Fan Angeleo   May 24, 2007


Dear Dad,
You left me
very sad,
I miss you very bad.

We thought you were dead.
In fact that's what they said
the day they came and took
away your bed.

Mom got so mad
because that was all she had,
No goodbyes were said
Just a note we had read.

Now my cold heart's wounded
You returned here now Moms dead
Why did you treat us so bad.
I am really really mad.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I read this again its the kind of poem i like
    plain and simple to the point no hidden
    things to try to figure out good job
    cy

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Nice piece, sad though read my profile
    its written with poems like this in mind
    hang in there cy

  • 16 years ago

    by Cee.Cee

    This poem inspired Dear Father on my account -blush-

  • 16 years ago

    by Cee.Cee

    I really like this
    its so real and touches me like you wouldnt believe
    Thank you very much for your comments
    it deffintly put a smile on my face hearing from you

    Im Carla by the way -blush-

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