To me it was so much more

by emptysole   May 24, 2007


To you it was just a dollar,
but to me it was so much more,
tonight I now can not eat,
as I sleep behind that broken door.

You took it from my hand,
while I was helping you,
i can barley afford to live,
i wish you had a clue.

So I hope one day you can feel the pain,
the pain that i do now,
the hunger burns my stomach,
make them stop, i wish i new how.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Good poem ans has great emotion in it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacob

    Tummy dulls the feeling of the poem i think stomach would go better but it is a good poem and it draws a picture that I can almost make out....but its good is this one u did in your drunkin madness?

  • 16 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I dont really understand but tis obveiosly something personal. well done
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