Although this poem was long it grabs you in the first stanza and doesn't let you go until the last. I loved the way you wrote it, to me it was like a story. I think a lot of people go through and experience these same feelings/actions. The poem was amazing and deserves nothing but a 5/5.

"Twisted thoughts within a disturbed mind
Make it impossible to leave the past behind"

this was very pwoerful, i really loved it. this poem is absolutely amazing, i would give it a 6/5 lol. i dunno how you managed to make me do it, but normally when i read poems i do it fast but still in the flow. But with this one, you slowed me right down as if i was reading a story, following a journaey and it has absoluetly amazed me. this poem is just breathtaking, you arangment of words and everythiing is perfect.

A well deserved 5/5 from me and its getting added to my favourites!!!

xxxx

This is a fantastic dark poem...
i don't know how to explain it, when i began to read it, i just couldn't stop, it was just too good... the choice of words was amazing...
the flow is really nice...i just love it...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

"I did not bow my head, but I mumbled a prayer
Now thinking of his icy cold eyes, his wicked glare"
This was an amazing poem. The rhymes are very well done, and there is some great imagery. It kinda got under my skin. Amazing job.
-Kelsea

K fricken long but it was good XD! I loved the choice of words. It made it really good. Excellent job

Thats really long but an enjoyable read. I read it before but didn't have time to comment. I've noticed you've started to improve with your poetry alot. your vocab has grown alot stronger. Well done. An enjoyable read. ~mel

Holy moley, that was amazing. Your word choice, emotion, imagery, everything(!) was fantastic. I loved it. The ending was, breathtaking. Simply a wonderful read. *Adding to favourites.

"I did not bow my head, but I mumbled a prayer
Now thinking of his icy cold eyes, his wicked glare"
^^Excellent lines

Powerful!Amazing!...right from the start to the very end..
Loved eevry line...the vocab used is...jesus!..lol..awesome!
Fab read all over!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

It was a long poem but it was worth reading! I like the rhyming couplet style! amazing choice of words! good job! language use is superb! beautifully penned! 5/5!

Wow.
Amazing!! One of my favorites by you.
One of your best!! Lol.
I loved it.
Great emotion, once again.
You're good for that.
Keep it up, hunni.

Absoultely amazing..very powerful words and it painted a vivid picture in my mind.. Great job

I have to admit that your vocabulary is amazing..so eliminated and powerful
My fave lines should be;

For my freedom, I tarnished my insufferable soul
Gave of myself, things that I had and did not know

Good job,
Laura

This dark poem was just executed flawlessly in your poetic style. In a way it reads like a mini-novel because of the surprise ending. The intensity of the emotion conveyed the experience of tragic abuse to the reader, in other words it seems that the author really identifies with the victim. These poems make up an interesting trilogy…outstanding work 5/5>>>>>>>>>