I loved it very much:):):)

i will give ya 5/5 :):):)

keep it up:):):)

khuloodan:))
smile all the time:))

Very interesting poem/tounge twister. It definetly makes you think about how english someimes makes no sense. Wonderful read! 5/5

I am confused now!
LOL,
good poem!
:)
kara

I am confused now!
LOL,
good poem!
:)
kara

I THINK THAT WAS HOT KEEP UP WIT THOSE

A very interesting poem, and quite funny as well, took some time to get around the tongue twister type lines but a good piece that i thoroughly enjoyed.
Love Tara-Kay
x

Although I had to read it more than once, it was a very intresting read. English, in my opinion, is such a confusing and at times senseless language. This poem was brilliant, I have yet to see anything else like it. Well done!

Hahha.
I loved itttttttt.
It'd be extremely useful to some people. :]

Lol, oh, wow...
I barely understood it but that was pretty funny! 5/5 for anything that can make me laugh!

LOL That was genius hahaha I enjoied that. thank you. :P

Okay....well i promised an honest comment. um im not real sure i understand this poem. but then again i was always easily confused. lol but the wording was good and caught my attention, and its something new. so all in all not your best but a 4/5 at the least

That was quite intresting.. English is very confusing. so thanks for clearing that up for me.. Haha no it kinda confused me more. anyway i thought it was good. 5/5

Lol good job on this one! it's like reading a tongue twister! haha! and again you did a great job! :)

Wow this is really good. i liked it a lot. i think you did a good job writing it 5/5

~Kristina

Haha great poem!! love it!!

5/5!! keep on writing!! i'll be checking back on your new poems later! :-)

Some times i feel like that i'm all mixed up and i don't know what to say.
good poem.5/5

Great!

I like this one a lot. well done. 5/5

I loved reading this poem! It was hilarious! The way it all sounded was perfect! There was nothing about it to make you stutter or trip over the words. Great write! 5/5!

~Mo~

Haha cute and Intresting.