A Hundred Million Tomorrows

by Mo   May 25, 2007


I could chase the world around
Just searching for the scent you throw
I would offer my heart to be bound
To you and your opaque shadow
I would sacrifice it all, for a simple promise
...that of a hundred million tomorrows

I forget who I am when Im with you
My face and heart and eyes aglow
and I loose myself in your eyes of blue
of the deep deep sea to which I throw
myself to drift thru weightlessness
... for a hundred million tomorrows

I would have to take my final breath
before I could let you go
I would die a hundred million deaths
of pain and torture and sorrow
to spend that one moment just with you
... for a hundred million tomorrows

The moment comes and then its gone
and my time that I have borrowed
Has been used up and now my pawn
has made me the one that owes
The gods of time a hefty debt
... for a hundred million tomorrows

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  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I can see elegant choice of words in your poem. Another element a certain poem containing is what mesmerizes me. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    Great nice poem:)
    i can feel the emotion in your poem
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the structure of the poem :) Flow was smooth, I really like the imagery created in the poem. You deserve a 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The softer side of you really came out in this poem, I loved the way your words flowed in this piece and the mood you set was nice Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautifully written...I found it to be very moving.
    The flow is good throughout the entire piece and the imagery you portrayed was beautifully done, it created vivid pictures for me.
    I liked the repetition you used, I thought it got your point across very well.

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