Comments : Look Away

  • 12 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Reminds me of some things. Great job Nicole! It's wonderful to see you back around!


  • 12 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Good poem, i know how you feel!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I know that I, and many others can really relate to the feelings and meanings of this poem. Sometimes we lie to ourselves to get through things. This reminds me of a piece of mine called The Duality Of Existence in that aspect. As long as we know deep down that it takes time, not fooling ourselves to get over something. This poem is more direct more specific and very well written. You have really captured emotion and truth here in such a perfect way.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 12 years ago

    by malina

    Another great and excellent poem!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey sweetie pie :) how are u? good i hope. Tnx so much for the lovely comment!

    u know your poetry is amazing and i love it! keep writing darlin. Stay true to yourself ok? *hugs* ruthie

  • 12 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it!!!!:)

  • 12 years ago

    by willowoman

    Great poem i know what that fills like thats my whole life

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    WOW. This was just amazing ! The words you spoke of were so true I found myself reading this one over just because I loved it so much.

    "Let the truth haunt your mind
    As a lie escapes your lips"
    That is just amazing !

    well done *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    There's so much emotion....It explains what I tend to do a little too often..I love it!..great write..=]

  • 12 years ago

    by makayla

    Good job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    I kno wat tht feels like
    good poem

  • 11 years ago

    by HollyNichole

    Lots of emotion in this! good job

  • 11 years ago

    by KJ

    Wonderful emotion
    Perfectly and beautifully written

  • 11 years ago

    by jessica

    I love all the poems you write there asome


  • 11 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    A poem for everyone who has been in love or infatuated with someone, nice theme not overdone skillfully written

  • 11 years ago

    by all4you

    I love love LOVE this poem!! im actually going through something that can relate to this 100%...Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by xx

    I love this one just as much as I love every one of your poems(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Taylor Badger

    Wow, just wow.
    you are such an amazing write.
    i loved it.

  • 3 years ago

    by ketaki

    Very good, can feel the pain of pretending, and difficulty of hiding pain and being as it is all well.