Broken Ties, Broken Ends

by skynerraw   May 25, 2007


Broken Ties,
Broken Ends
All of those lies
I thought you were my friend

I feel so alone
In this world of lies
I hold back a moan
Thinking of my broken ties

Don't ever talk to me
You're so pretend
You didn't think I'd see
That you're my broken end

So get outta my face
Get outta my hair
This ain't your place
I don't want to see you there

Keep out of my way
i neber want to see you again
You're gonna pay
After I count to ten

These broken ties,
And broken ends
From you're lies
You used to be my friend

*-Sky-*

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  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I loved the last stanza,
    "These broken ties,
    And broken ends
    From you're lies
    You used to be my friend"
    it rocked my socks off, lol.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "These broken ties,
    And broken ends"

    amazing lines right there, keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by cutytothebuty

    Amazing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Good poem sky! is it about who i think it is? 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Very good poem!!! i have one suggestion at the bottom of the poem at this section:
    "i neber want to see you again"
    do you mean never instead of neber?
    really sad and good poem.
    peace

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