Describing you(edited)

by Stephanie Naylor   May 25, 2007


I want to be with you
smell that scent
that resonates
from your golden brown skin

I want to taste that taste
that lingers on your lips
it tastes like cherries,
freshly picked

I want to feel your hands wander my body
those hands so soft,
delicate
but still strong

But most of all i want you for what you are
The most amazing person i have ever met

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like this one. I think that you could create better atmosphere. Wording is not good and imagery is poor. You're other poems are better than this one. That is just my opinion, I won't rate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was so wonderful. I loved the metaphores, they were so sweet and sounded like they were comming straight from the heart. My favorite part thought was how none of the metaphores were over used in face they were all new. Nice work. And the ending was the perfect touch, sweet but not overkill. Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is really a unique poem. Ur style, wordings, flow n the beautiful meanings make it such a unique one. Few words with repotior of meanings. Wow!
    plx do read my 'Thank you'

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lovely work...Powerful emotions portrayed thru this one...great wrk!...sweet...n good word choice too...lol.....very cute poem...
    Kp writing=)
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The words were so powerful and sweet

    But if you use punctuation..it would be better

    And last if you capitalize 'i's you would make appearance flawless too

    Other than those beatifully written
    Keep it up
    Laura

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