Our Future

by Mousie   May 25, 2007


Teddy bears and rattles
Dimples, chubby cheeks,
Choo-choo trains and building blocks
Curious instinct.

Teensy hand and footprints
Pitter-patter run,
Stumbles of the learning mind
Delighted by the fun.

Messy face of birthday cake
One year old at best,
Innocent and cherished young
Yearning for the rest.

The years of faithful childhood
Dawning on the youth,
Person's of a later day
Our future's living proof.

i needed to write this for my aunt for something on child advocacy. let me know if it's any good, she basically didn't give me anything to go by.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Dear, you always come up with unique topics that i dont get to read in my everyday visit to P&Q, that is the reason your poems are great and greater.
    as always a 5/5 as you truly deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by SomeRomanticGuy

    Yet you produced an awesome poem.
    =D

  • 16 years ago

    by kitkat girl

    Good poem, i really like the lines:
    "Teddy bears and rattles
    Dimples, chubby cheeks,
    Choo-choo trains and building blocks
    Curious instinct."
    it sounds soo cute!!
    peace