Comments : Egami Rorrim

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think the poem is awesome because at first glance you don't even realize what it is, it doesn't even look english. Most people would just stop reading right there without a second thought. I think that's just like your poem and the fact that sometimes the reflection in the mirror doesn't show the true colours of who we are. People choose to see what they want to see, sometimes they miss out on amazing chances because they were to stupid to take a second look. I thought the poem was excellent and the way you wrote it backwards was special and unique, thats the way it would look in a mirror image. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I love the Idea, most people dont really read poems, it is a great way to make people actually read it. and your right about the mirror image! you definitely deserve a 5/5!
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow.. that was awsome.. Just makes you think how many people actucally read poems.

    I thought this was wonderful.
    My reflection
    Lacking profection
    Mocks me harshly
    Crippling me quickly
    My favorite stanza.. i thought that it flowed really good. and the rhyme was wonderful. i like how you wrote it backwards
    this poem is about mirror image's and its how it would look in a mirror.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Just Wow. That is all I can mutter right now. I absouletly absouletly loved it. I am beyond speechless right now because not only is it completely awesome that you wrote it backwards, the message in the actual poem is so strong and clear. I love how anyone can relate to this poem because no matter what you do, everytime you look in the mirror, all you can focus on is the bad aspects of your reflection and all the things wrong with it. I also love how because you wrote it backwards, it puzzles people who actually like to read and go into the depth of poems. You amaze me with your skill. It deserves much more than a 5/5, but that's what I'll have to settle for.

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Alright that was really really diffrent at first I was like what the f but I figured I liked that style you used to get attention, It made me think, really, went along witht the poem too, mirror images. really diffrent and really really amazing. I loved this and i am putting it in my favorites, That was worth the effort.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I found this poem to be quite amazing atleast it makes people ACTUALLY read the poem not just skim through it. I found the first stanza to be amazing your words were stunning truely beautiful. This was definitly an amazing read. Well done~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Deb ot back gniog m'I.
    ^ You forgot to write "back" backwards.

    This was really interestingg, I thought it was very clever of you to write it backwards. But i must admit i found it a little annoying reading it that way. Other than that, great job, it was a little simple but some poems work well like that. The images were great and the emotion clear. The metaphors worked welll too. Nicely done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    I'm surprised at how quickly I picked that up. I didn't think I would at first glance. Meh. Nevertheless, an emotive piece in its unusual and unique way. Well done and I applaud you as the first person to actually put this style in action :).

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    That was very interesting. great way to make
    someone think.

    No One Needs To see
    This Disgusting Face Of Me
    I'll Just Hide Under Covers
    Save The Others From Suffer.

    My favorite Stanza.
    great job.!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hah this is really cool
    definitly original
    very nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Stupid mirror imgage! WoW it took a lil time for me to read whole poem. Its really good 5/5. I think 'back' should b 'kcab' as per the stipulated rules. he he its great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Oh wow..this poem is awesome! the idea of the mirror reflectiion writing is so blimming clever! and the use of the metaphors was really good, coz it was quite mysterious how the whole poem had a whole other meaning. and even all the metaphors themselves together had a meaning too..if u get wat i mean..lol neways..overall..this isa very good poem, im expecting it to be in the weekly contest =] nuf luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Umm...
    This is weird.
    I get it, though.
    Backwards.
    I don't know, I just find this weird.
    Hard to grade and hard to understand.
    All in all,
    Like I said, dear...
    Strange 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Tiz yreve,
    Ti gnitcelfer rorrim eht,
    Der dna gib,
    Deb ot back gniog m'I.
    [[I really dislike this stanza at all.]]

    Ees ot sdeen eno on,
    Em fo ecaf gnitsugsid siht,
    [[I'm not sure why, but I really like that line.]]

    This is an interesting idea, and it must have taken a lot of time to do it and figure it out. Nicely done there, however, I thought the overall poem wasn't that well. The idea of how to write it was great, but the actual poem once you read it, wasn't.
    Sorry.

    xTheEcstaysofSuicidex 4.5