Nice poem .. deep feeling .. good job.
keep it up

Beautiful poem..lovely work...filled wth love n u've penned in a good manner..loved it
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I thought this was a really good poem.. Deep emotions.. and nicely written. i think it flowed well also. 5/5

A 5/5 poem which is a great romantic love poem in which you clearly explained your feelings toward your love, great job.

I liked it. It had a nice flow and good word choice. The only thing I didn't like was the "&"
just spell it out. I think that the "&" just take away from the poem. I gave it a 5/5.

This poem is short and sweet while also full of love and emotion. The flow is great and i loved your word choice, love is definately special and you've expressed it well. Fantastic job 5/5

This is a delightfully simple yet seeminly straight from the heart love poem

I liked this poem, It was simple yet effective. I found it to hold such strong emotions in such simple words. This poem was full of love and I found this to be a great read. Well done with this. ~mel

This was quite delightful to read. It's seeming earnest sentiments endears me completely, whereas the lines need tightening up.

A cute piece, nonetheless.

-Marian =]

I want you to know I will do what it takes,
^ I think it would sound better as "whatever" instead of "what".

Awh, this was sweet. The flow was pretty good but the rhymes made it a bit awkward. Try and work on that. Also, the words you used were quite simple, expand your vocabulary a little bit and it will make your descriptions better. Nice job though. 4/5

This is a really good poem~
5/5

I really like this poem i relate to almost every line you can tell its so true good job jackie keep up th good work
i would really apreciate if you returned the faovr k
*cupcake*