Time Passes By

by Zeus   May 27, 2007


Days go by in the blink of an eye
Weeks pass by yet but we don't feel
How we are growing up so fast
Life as we know it, seems so surreal

I remember girls once being "yucky"
I never used to worried about a girl
But now those feelings have rapidly change
And girls, to me, they mean the world

I used to let my feelings show
I would cry every time I fell
But now when I fall, i try to hide it
As if the pain was never dealt

I remember I once, was so naive
Now I'm experienced and no longer unaware
Everything around me is so apparent
And now I live life in fear, so scared

From not knowing a thing
To grasping the concept of death
From fearing monsters under the bed
To fearing for my last breath

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I liked this piece it showed a lot of emotion the strucher was thought out very well I have only seen one thing that would improve this poem the line "I never used to worried about a girl" should be I never used to be worried about a girl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Th feeling that you reflected on this poem were amazing..The topic was great and so true that everyone can sometimes relate to
    But just a little suggestion

    i try=I try

    Well done,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    For the most part you don't see alot of humanitain poems and when you do it is real breif and fleeting. I am happy to see you have got a nack for it and I hope you nuture it for when used correctly you have the power to change the course of the world with just a few words Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Only if we stop and think what we do in our this short life, lol.
    a true poem written greatly with a grea tmessage. keep it up dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    I love the way that you mentioned different transitions of one's life in this poem. This was a wonderful read. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

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