Dearest Heart: Part 5

by xPerfect Chaosx   May 27, 2007


----STOP---- If you have not read the first 4 parts go back and do so now!! Thank you!!!

Dearest Heart,

You tell me that I am foolish?? How am I foolish?? If you take the risk of setting yourself up, you know in the end you will only fall and hurt yourself. Is the pleasure of now really worth the hurt of later?? Why would you even bother with something idiotic like that? I have never been hurt once in Her lifetime and you call me foolish?? You are the one who is always ending up hurt and broken. I have to sit up here and put up with your foolish ventures and watch Her fall apart on the inside every time you screw up. I say this for the best of her, stop this nonsense.

Sincerely,
The Mind

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it. I do not plan on stopping the series just yet, so no worries, lol. Please r/r/c thank you!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    The fact that the tension is beginning to heat up in the atmostphere interests me exceedingly. I loved how the mind was concerned for the heart's sake and for the person's well-being. His (the mind) actions definitely ignited a negative reaction from the heart. In addition, it's difficult for me, in all likelihood to the troubled individual, to take sides between the heart and the mind, because both of them certainly have very good points! :D Keep them coming, sweets! XD Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by George

    I like the way the tension has grown...it seemed very formal up till now which did not seem right for this kind of dialogue. Now that its beginning to become more familiar it is getting so much better!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well done, I loved this one too, the word choice again was excellent, and the emtion just keeps getting deeper and deeper, I really loved this. all of these parts fit togather wonderfully, and i would like to read more. 5/5 one more time

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    =] once again, your poem bought a smile to my face lol, its just so full of itself...feelings and emotions. the mind seems to be fed up of seeing 'her' hurt again and again by the hearts 'foolish'-ness. i wonder whats coming next...? gd luk...nuf luv xx 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow Its like a little comic but without the pictures, well i do see the pictures in my head..yea im strange.. well awesome serie of poems, and I hope to read the next one soon,
    take care 5/5
    kisses stephanie

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