Perfect becomes crashing

by Raychil   May 28, 2007


Pieces falling
Slip away
Pull them back
But they won't stay

Tears come crashing
Blood drips down
Keep on going
But still hit the ground

People yelling
Ears ring loud
Why can't they
Just be proud?

Faces smiling
Bitter lies
Countless failures
Countless tries

Be yourself
And only meet hate
Be someone else
And seal your fate

Try and fly higher
The longer you fall
Try to be perfect
You've lost it all...

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  • 14 years ago

    by megan

    You are writing one excellent poem after another...you must have great inspiration lately!!

  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Gooood job dude,good job dude..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, amazing.
    You just keep suprizing me.
    Sorry i haven't been on to comment you,
    i've been very busy.
    Your poem was brillant.

    -Amberinaa.
    xoxox.
    Much love darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was good i loved the flow in this one also. it was great. keep up the work!
    5/5 always
    Kate

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