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by Laurie Tran   May 28, 2007


Can you tell me what is going on?
I honestly need to know.
You tell me you love me one day,
Then you say you gotta go.

Are you playing with my feelings?
That fragile little thing you hold?
Quit acting like it's just a game,
A broken heart's going to unfold.

Is my personality a little too extreme for you?
Can you just not handle me?
Cuhs if you really can't stand the way I am,
Be honest and set me free.

I don't want to have your face in my mind,
every night before I go to bed.
If you don't have any feelings for me,
If this love was already dead.

I didn't write this poem just for entertainment .
I wrote it after thinking of you .
If Laurie Tran is not who you see yourself with,
then I must bid you adieu .

2007 [c] Laurie Tran

[credit for my best friend Mindy who helped make it sound a ton better ]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Wow you and your friend are great. This was an awesome poem. People need to stop playing games cuz they messing things up for the nice guys like me lol. Great job
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    That was rely nice n u n ur frend did a wonderful job. yeh, u make the word love feel like a hole new world.

    babe 5/5 =]

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    You still need to edit it, sweetie (:

    If you don't have any feelings for me ,
    if this love was already dead .
    `Then this love soudns better ;D

    Quit acting like it's a game,
    A broken heart's going to unfold .
    `Like it's just a game sounsd better .

    I love doing this to you HAHA but nahw, don't listen to me . Just take the time to edit this poem . YOu have all summer . You bum . Leaving me for Philly -.-

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well... real life story?? Seems straight from the heart! Well written... Keep writing!

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