Comments : Time

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well done. keep writiing and surely your talent will arise, great first poem. nice wording and emotions.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    I liked this poem very much!!....really emotive
    keep up the gr8 work
    bree

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    :( so said! Love it! You have a beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Uncomparable to my poems! your the best!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... I love this one. I can relate to it in so many ways. You portrayed your emotions in this piece excellently, and you said so much in just three stanzas. Whole poem is also very original.
    Truly deep and heartfelt write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I really like this . It is creative and the ending was inspiring. Excellent job on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    It was really sad,
    Beautiful written.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by minh

    Hmmm.... says alot in so few lines, very good job!

    thank you, and keep it up

    take care ;]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Once again I have found a poem that we share the title of (Time) , (Wnds of Change )
    It seems that a different perspective on the same subject multiplies the effect greatly

    This is such a well written , enlightening piece of poetry and I certainly will read more of your heart and mind in verse

  • 16 years ago

    by expressivechild

    So sad! I felt like this some time ago when I feel cheated by her. Only difference is, it changed me in some ways and I realize how much I needed love.

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This poem reminded me a bit of my characters.. you know, Iden and Devon. I'm not sure why, but Iden brings out something everybody has. :) And that's what I love about your poem.. I'm sure most people can relate with it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    As time progressed I finally understood
    you are just another side of me...
    ^^ wow good job with that i like the realization you came to it made me think of when i was in that situation and that is probably what i should have realized

    great job with flow and wording very good poem! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Hey love this poem
    its like a person found
    there inner self but the
    dark side of them selfs
    but love it (^_^)

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Very well put words expressing your emotions quite well, and yes is it not true how time seems to stand still when things go really well or really bad. Well done

    You spelled grief wrong

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Wow, good poem! ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mmm very hard to understand , through all the emotions and i can feel the chock of the insident !!!

    it made the world stop !!

    i love the intensity of the feelings , it made , me remmber , my own!!!

    gerat poem \\

    my favorite is :
    As time progressed I finally understood
    you are just another side of me...

    i love that and i ca relate in so many ways
    !!

    you deserve my vote

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Hmm, wow I really liked this one. It carries a very strong message and it is very true. The wording and everything was great about this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Sad and yet promising. Love isn't always fair, or forever. But from your poems I see you not only know this but enjoy the times you love and are able to move on
    This was so well said. Enjoyed every word

  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    Alll your poems are absolutely amazing!

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    I liked the simplicity of this poem in contrast to how hard it is to move on from someone/something that we once loved. A beautiful write, I particularly enjoyed the ending. 5/5

    mandy :)