Dearest Heart: Part 6

by xPerfect Chaosx   May 28, 2007


----STOP---- If you have not read the 1st five parts, go back and do so now! Thank you!

Dearest Mind,

You think this is foolish?? You think that all the knowledge and experience I have gained out of this is foolishness?? She had never before in her life been so happy. You know She doesn't regret anything that happened because She grew as a person. You are hypocritical, you say you have never been hurt. You realize that by staying in isolation like you do is only hurting yourself. You cannot grow or learn by staying away. You grow and learn by doing. You are naive. Now, you say that you are sick of her falling apart after every one of my "foolish ventures". Every single time She has managed to put herself back together with no help from you. I think She is stronger than you give her credit for. You take no risks, you gain nothing. You take risks, you may lose something, but at least you tried to make things better. You, you sit up there cold and aloof. I cannot stop the pain He caused, but I know it will eventually go away. You on the other hand, you will be a constant thorn in my side as I try to better Her. Good day

Sincerely,
The Heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I love this! I thought I had read this one before my grounding but I guess I was mistaken. Great job hun! I love these! One to the next one!
    5/5
    <3333
    Much Love!
    xYourWifeyx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Oh I like it. Its full of emotion and so deep. It makes me ponder a lot. Your choice of words were good. Overall I thought it was really great XD.

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    OOO.. very deep.. I think this is a very good thing your doing.. Giving people the insite on how the "Heart" or "Mind" thinks..

    You have really cought my attenion here i look forward to reading more.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    The heart sounds very wise here. Hmm. Indeed, it is when you get hurt that you grow stronger. When you gain experience from past's mistakes and triumphs, you grow up and mature into a wonderful being. This was utterly brilliant! I, however, fear to say that I disagreed with this statement, "Every single time She has managed to put herself back together with no help from you." The mind certainly is conducive to the individual's healing, I dare say. Without the mind and sensible reasons, how would the individual properly sort things out? Hmm, I suppose the heart made a mistake there... But then again, I'll reiterate what I've said in my first review: the heart and the mind are synonymous with each other. :) Can't wait to read more! Love, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by George

    And the conflict grows...I've really loved this...its quite a series, and so true! Its emotionally intense, yet in the manner of its presentation it becomes somewhat comical...wonderful!

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