For your love

by Tracy D Rollings   May 28, 2007


Demons in my head
just keep ripping away
Wishing I was dead
yet they all stay.

Slowly working down
Evil beings that they are
feeling like a clown
Pain from inner scars.

From the tear in my heart
they work right on past
eating my mind apart
know my heart won't last.

Slowly as I wait for death
would turn time back
could have my last breath
don't worry, have your slack.

I'll let them take me not you
for they know my flesh well
there's nothing more to do
you'll get heaven, I've got hell.

When you get to heaven
say you were really loved
day and night twenty four seven
I shall not go quiet like a dove.

I will yell it out loud
the one they didn't love
screaming out into the crowd
welcome son of pain from above.©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, another one Tracy you really impressing me.
    Everything is great, wording, atmosphere and flow. This is deep and excellently written peace. You expressed emotions perfectly.
    This poem is powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, this poem is written very well. I loved it. Kept me into it the whole time. Great job keep up the amazing work 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Amazing...just amazing. I love your poems. This one is so intensive and dark...

  • 16 years ago

    by Teresa

    Deep,Sad.really great writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Thx for your comment on my poem im sorry for the mistakes sometimes I struggle with my reading and wrighting so u may find this in a few on my poems.