I am yours (Etheree)

by Fsams   May 30, 2007


Come close & feel the desires inside me
Let me feel your touch let me feel free
Fill the gaps between my fingers
And feel desires that lingers
Love is true I promise
And I will be wise
To share the tears
For all years
I am
Yours!

Written by Fsams
27/05/07
To know about this form of poetry read my 'Lost'.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    O my god, this is the best poem (ruled) I have ever read in my life. Dont have words to express how perfect it is! 100/100

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    I like this one... Its short but says alot
    you can really write

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh, this is so touching. Simplicity of this piece is effective, and you did great job with form. You expressed emotions in a great way, put your heart in this lovely piece.
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    W o w
    that's all i can say
    w o w
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was such a sweet and you surprised me with how detailed it is. the imagery that this etheree brought to my mind was so strong, and usually etheree's dont give of that good of a picture nice work. 5/5

    nikki

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