Then One Day

All the pain she had felt
slowly faded by
she knew the lost girl,in the mirror
was really just a lie

that was my favorite stanza really great poem!i loved it!

Tis a good poem amber, love the flow and word choice, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Aaah that was very nicely done.. nicely panned. i loved yuour writing style. take care 5/5

I found this poem to be a sweet and interesting read. The emotions were powerful and I liked how this poem changed. It kept me interested from start to end. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel

#2: This was quite a delightful read, sweet. One of the things which makes me feel glad in regards to Love is how a person dramatically changes (in a good way) through the aid of his/her better half. Nicely penned, nonetheless. I gave it a 5/5!

Debbie