Wishing

Short, sweet, and simple. the triple S: beautiful

Im sure everyone cal relate to this poem cuz everyone has felt this at somepoint in time. its amazing.

I've never read a short poem thats deep like this one. good poem 5/5

Aww i loved this poem, im sure like me alot of others can realate to it .. your beginning stanza really spoke to me;
I walk past you
Every day
But not one word
Escapes my mouth
It's such a typical event that we all at one point feel, and looking back at it you wonder to yourself..why? why did i not just even say hello..
Even though your poem was short and simple it was very deep, and you portrayed something that is important to alot of us ; true love!
insiaring!
xXx

Well wriiten, love is definalty strong in this poem, the flow is good, the word choice is excellent, and the message is clear. Maybe it could be a little longer it seems like something is missing. As for a title maybe nothing maters but me and you, or only you. 5/5