I still care

by m i s s k a t e l y n   Jun 1, 2007


I am falling apart
cause you still have
my heart

you just returned my
call to tell me you cant
talk

nothing new really
same old heart brake

you just dont seem
to get it

i still care and
i still want you to be there

every morning when i
wake up i try to fall back asleep

because you are in my dreams
and no matter what happens
i still care and i want you to be here

no one really knows each day
that i am fighting back tears
and i am living this lie

cause i keep trying but
you dont seem to care
and its just not fair

cause i really do care
and i still want you here
i love you
always have and always will

-true story. sad but true. let me know what you think please.-

-miss katelyn..duh x/3

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  • 16 years ago

    by m3G4NncOdY

    I love this poem it reminds me of me and my ex boyfriend. keep on writing poems. ur an excellent writer!

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, ur such a good writter. i like ur work so much im makin u as a favorite!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Alright this is good. i dont quite understand the 3\5 the person up there gave you im giving you a 4\5. as much as i would love to give you a 5\5 im just not sure. evrything went together well and it is very deep and ur a wonderful writer but im just not sure about a 5\5. idlove to give u a 4.5 but yeah. great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is awesome. i agree with the first cmt made about the dreaming stanza. that was awesome. i could really relate to this poem. good work! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    I like this poem, but you need more deep words to make sense. really, it is still good but ah never mind. it is hard to explain. well...good job. 5/5

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