Where i am

by my heads on upside down   Jun 1, 2007


Plz comment once u'v read this.... plz?

On the other side,
is where i am
its not a nice place,
where i am

the sun doesn't shine as bright,
where i am
but this all i have,
and its where i am

no one smiles,
where i am
and no one understands,
where i am

I'm so far away,
where i am
but this is all i have,
and its where i am

I'm stuck here,
where i am
i cant get back,
from where i am

its so dark here,
where i am
but this is my world,
and its where i am

iv found a way out,
of where i am
Coz i don't like it,
where i am

its a sad place,
where i am
but this is my world,
and its where i am

i cant get back,
from where i am
but i can go forward,
from where i am,

theres a bridge,
where i am
and over that bridge,
is where i am

its a better place now,
where i am
my eternal life,
is where iv gone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Wow this is good

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

    keep it the great writting

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    Good poem : ) i like the whole repetition thing ...
    <3 jess

  • 16 years ago

    by Peachy

    Great poem!!:]

  • 16 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    Hey this is really great :D
    the repetition works totally well
    and it expresses alot of emotion :]
    looking forward to anything new put up :P
    5/5 x

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