The Ws of life

by my heads on upside down   Jul 6, 2007


What is happening to this world that we live in?
where shall we all end up?
why have we become the way we are?

the answers to these questions are right in front of us
but we will just keep ignoring them until it is too late!

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  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Great use of alliteration in such a short poem, you used it effectively. You have raised many unanswered questions that I must agree on, may never be answered.
    Nicely written. Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job!

    What is happening to this world that we live in?
    where shall we all end up?
    why have we become the way we are?

    So many unanswered questions. I don't know if we will ever get them.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    Hmm interesting structure but poetic license >> dont know if i used that right :S)) love it :]

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