What are you doing to me

by veronica   Jun 1, 2007


What are you doing to me?
i feel like the dirt beneath the earth,
i feel like i'm being pulled down,
each day passes by,
please come back and cure me from this desease that cought my soul,heart and mind.

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  • 18 years ago

    by veronica

    Thankyou robie for ecourging me ,you're such a sweet friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I Think this is a very nice poem!
    thats how you start...
    youve got it in you ... to write a poem...
    but you never really express your self...
    and i like how you described things in this poem! your learning... FINALY :D

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