My beloved

by veronica Jun 2, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other

My beloved ones are holding on to my soul,
and trying to say it by reaching to it,
but i am slipping away,
and drowining into your decieving sea.

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18 years ago
by Robie Lincer

This is nice and well written
love the words you used...
but try using your imagination a little more...
and try making it longer...
18 years ago
by kimara4955

Hi, i like this poem its short, powerful and to the point, good job 5/5
xxtake carexx