I love

by Mo   Jun 1, 2007


I love the windswept day outside
As I hold my head up and cry
And look out my window at nobody passing by

I love a night with frosty bites
As I raise my eyes and start to fight
For your memories to stay with me just one more night

I love them because I think of you
And all the pain you put me through
Evaportates to nothing, just like the morning dew

I love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was simple but beautiful.. Just like real love.. The ending was good :) it sums up all the emotions. Another fine written piece from you :)

    5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    I thought this poem was like a beautiful short love story ,excellent imagery, I could picture the melancholy.very well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hebe

    Sweet and shot.
    I really liked reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    That last line...so pretty and touching at the same time.
    I liked the format you used in this, I think you pulled of the rhyme scheme well.
    The only suggestion I would have for this is to try and eliminate some of the fillers (I, and etc) to make the flaw absolutely flawless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. The flow was ok. The word choice was all right. I gave this poem a 5/5.

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