I love your poem very neaningful 5/5

I like the moral lesson behind it. i think a lot of people can relate to the first couple of stanzas... the losing friends part of it. i also noticed how you managed to make pleasing and reason rhyme so you get extra points for that.

Wow
he must have been really mad!
i wouldve been too
great poem!

Oh my god, I LOVE this poem, its perfect, and it flows so beautifully, I aboslutely love it.

The screams in your face
Keep playing back in your head
This time your words
Should've been left unsaid

I really like this part ^^

Good poem overall. I liked the story of it and can kind of relate to the first part of it. It had good flow and emotion
xx
Taegan Emily