This is good!!! i loved it!
amanda

Very good love it

So sad. it really gets your mind working. well done

Damn you good. I like this one, the way the poem went was perfect

Wow!
Amazing poem!
Please keep writing

Danielle
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This was a really sad poem :(
but it was well worded, my fav stanza was
"But tonight was the night, she went to deep.
One cut was all it took, to end a life in such tragedy." it just stood out to me i think its cuz the way u worded it but idk
i luved the way each word just seemed to flow perfectly to the next
great work
5/5

Wow. This one was kinda sad. But it was really Great too. You are a good writer

Great writer. im going to give u a 5\5. nice job!!

The feeling overpowers you. For me, I rate this a 6. Thank you so much for the writing. Please keep it up.....xoxo

The feeling overpowers you. For me, I rate this a 6. Thank you so much for the writing. Please keep it up.....xoxo

Good

The flow, was excellant
such a sad peice
but loved it
5/5