One love

by deceitfulXkisses   Jun 2, 2007


I take this one last bullet
and let it Peirce my skull
because you wanted me gone
my blood is now on the wall
you were supposed to love me
but instead just let me fall
didn't even bother to try
so now I'm gone forever
cause all you did was make me want to die...

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  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    Really...really...really great poem...
    short but simple..the words went together...like they are just ment to be there... one of the best short wrights ive ever red...5/5 will recomend your name to a few poets....kepp up the great work in the mean time...have to let everyone know..how great ur words slide :)
    jesz xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this was really short & sad. but you did an amazing job writing it. loved the rhyming pattern. keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I really like this poem. It's sad but it's really good and I can relate to it in a way. Good job!

    Kelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by deceitfulXkisses

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