Beneath The Stars (Quatern)

by Anaisthitos   Jun 3, 2007


As she lay beneath the stars with him
Lay in the tall, parched grass
She stared up in the sky
She was happy, at last!

She held his hand, firm in hers
As she lay beneath the stars with him
They were both extathic, together
She stroked his hair, again and again

She felt everything was tolerable
Everything would surely be OK
As she lay beneath the stars with him
She wanted to sit here all night and day

He wasn't just a boy to her
He was the love behind her grin
She wasn't just a girl, either
As she lay beneath the stars with him

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A Quatern is a poem with four stanzas, 4 lines in each stanza. The first line repeats in the second line of the second stanza, the third line of the third stanza and the fourth line of the fourth stanza

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  • 16 years ago

    by A F

    Awww. Such a nice poem.
    I like it.

    xxx.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww sweet poem. i only found one thing to fix.

    They were both extathic, together

    i think you meant estatic. like super happy?

    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Aww this poem is so cute and it reminds me of me and my boyfriend i really like this poem i just cant stop thinkin about my man now! lol but you are a very talented writter! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Nicely writte. You could expand on the idea a little more, making it more captivating and a better read. You had a few spelling mistakes, but thats easily corrected.
    My favourite line would have to be...
    'He was the love behind her grin'
    I thought it was just beautiful and Heart touching.
    Keep writting.
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was very sweet. it reminds me of my one lost love that i would do anything for to have him back.. awesome. 5/5

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