Too Much

by x Mo x   Jun 4, 2007


I can't take it right now.
The pain is too much to bear.
I just want to let go;
To lose all thought and never care.

If only I could be free;
Lose all hurt and sorrow.
Oh the things I could do.
Oh the places I could go.

Just when I was fine.
My life crashed back down.
My smile has faded,
It's only a frown.

When I finally crashed,
I thought my life would end.
But it didn't end then,
I was saved by my friends.

~Originally written 1-5-2007~

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  • 16 years ago

    by MissAlyssaGraff

    Thats really cute, it was all sad and stuff and then u turned it around in one line. and thats a hard thing to do. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very heartfelt piece.I loved reading this piece. It really catches my attention and affects my feelings. Keep writing and sharing.

    Fsams

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