Incurable Split

by supratim   Jun 5, 2007


Unseen and unknown was the mystic dance
Who so stealthily could push someone to climb a prickly branch,
Hidden to all even though Eternal and all pervading
Like an unseen mamba's soul coiling someone for a venomous bonding!

He has the power to make a heart beat and drive for a fast,
Letting warm corners grow and soft lotus bloom even knowing they will be trampled at last.

Shouldn't have moulded two dark eyes
If knew they will be turned blackholes by cyclones of sighs,
Could make a lonesome heart stay alone
Rather than letting it bond with an angel that will forever be gone.

Why did He push a sickly mind for a friendly angelic grip ??
Whose touch had left a scar and a sordid but obtrusive strip !!

Shouldn't have left a mirror heart unattended letting it beat,
If it was known that at the end will be dumped with a blood deemed
and incurable split.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nathan

    See i cant do this. this is great

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Ahh another good poem! wright more so i can read! lol :D

  • 16 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is really good.
    keep it up.
    i loved some of the lines in it they were so origional it was amazing.
    really good job.
    <3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    I loved it.....it kept my attention throughout the whole time. i didnt want to miss a single syllable. it was soooo complex every single word made me think deeper and deeper into the meaning of the sentence. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats the best part:

    He has the power to make a heart beat and drive for a fast

    good job i really like it

    Thanks for the comment on my poem
    it means alot to me

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