Field of Innocence (Sonnet II)

by Bryan   Jun 5, 2007


Tis moonlight that dances upon her face,
sends chills up my back, i stare in her eyes,
they enchant my heart in this horrid place,
lost in this moment, my heart slowly cries.

Toxic is her touch, she touches my skin,
lips upon my face, making my heart leap,
her beautiful love that i hope to win,
takes all that i have for me not to weep.

Happy I'm becoming, took me so long,
still i write sonnets to my broken heart,
I'm tired of playing the same old love songs,
making me sad while tearing me apart.

In a Fields of Innocence, i will wait,
hoping she will come, always filled with hate.

sonnet is a 14 lines poem with a syllable count of 10 abab, cdcd, efef, gg rhyme scheme

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  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Heyy I liked the sonnet. I should try one!! Hehe...Like almost everyone who commented above me, I think you use beautiful words in the poem! The word usage was super! =) Take care,
    Ash

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Hey great poem and thanks for the comment:)

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Beautiful piece. Imagery is great. You do have a way with these poetry forms.

    Tis moonlight that dances upon her face,
    sends chills up my back, i stare in her eyes,
    they enchant my heart in this horrid place,
    lost in this moment, my heart slowly cries.

    Loved these lines. Very heartfelt.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a trully great sonnett, thanks for the comment 5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh thats so beautiful. Lots of feeling like Lis said, its wonderful. Pure love....perfect!

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