Nothing Girl

by Nicole the Fairy   Jun 6, 2007


~ Nothing Girl ~

I am imaginary.
I see no one.
No one sees me.
Just clear, black, white,
Red, to bleed.

I hide my tears behind my smiles.
My smiles are fake.
No one knows what I hide.
They will never know,
What I keep inside.

Others yell and let it out.
They never seem to care who's around.
I never show any signs.
I make them guess and guess,
Until they find out, they are long behind.

Day in and day out.
The world never notices me.
On purpose or accident,
They forget I'm even here,
Standing all alone.
I'm just God's failed experiment.

When I cover my face,
I feel nothing.
All I feel is the wet,
The wet from the tears I cry.
Every time is hard to forget.

I have figured I am imaginary.
Seeing no one.
No one seeing me in this world.
I have done the math.
I really am a Nothing Girl.

Written By: Nicole Pirri
Tuesday, 5th June, 2007
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  • 15 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    I love the short, truncated lines in the beginning. They are expressed so bluntly, as if they are facts and everyone knows them. It really sets the mood for the piece.

    A few typos in the third and fourth stanzas ("who�s around", "forget I�m even" and "�m just God�s failed", these happen a lot when you copy and paste when you submit). The very last one really takes away from the meaning, I would make sure to change this right away. Again, the lines are getting short toward the end; helping to heighten my suspense.

    In the last stanza, MATHS should be MATH.

    Otherwise, this is very well written. I love the short powerful lines and I like how everything seems to be spoken like everyone knows it. There is no empty lines that people could misread and the mood is well played.

    Great job. I have a lot of poems similar to this, so I know it can be hard to express your point without overplaying it.

  • 15 years ago

    by january friend

    I think we all feel like this every once in a while. good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Trul a wonderful poem to read and so full of insight.

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