A Shielded Image

by Hatori   Jun 6, 2007


Her heart is a shield,
Never to be unconcealed,
A rude thought or remark,
Could never be enough to embark,
On a thought of revenge,
Or a glint of avenge.

Her mind is now a locked case,
Never letting her feelings take place,
Over what must be done,
Or is yearning to be undone.

The only way,
To free her from this dismay,
Is to end her miserable life,
As time slowly causes many a strife.

The time has come,
She is no longer the shield,
She is an angel who was concealed,
Locked up for far too long, just waiting to be healed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yuna

    That was a very powerful piece of writing! I'm very impressed! *Claps* You're thoughts are very well organized and I loved how the poem progressed instead of stalling. Your describing of certain key thoughts are very well done, and I can tell that your mind is one that's deeper than what is seen. Keep writing and Great job!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That is really good, I love your ending it is really good, but why does everything lead to death? I don't understand....surely there is something else....
    Nice work
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  • 16 years ago

    by Jasmine

    Loved the comparisons :-)
    your use of words is simply irresistible..
    now, don't get offended but I must ask-how come your English is so good even though you're not a native speaker??

    Bravo again!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Good message great flow i like this one alot
    5/5
    laura

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