Comments : DEMONS

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    I love this poem. I've added u to my fav authors! Keep writing PLZ!!
    pc
    Kat

  • 16 years ago

    by shadow

    Short and sweet!

  • 16 years ago

    by nicole

    Good work cy =]

  • 16 years ago

    by winterseve28

    I thought you were talking about the drugs in the first 2 stanzas, but then I was surprised. Glad to read a poem from you. As always, well written and unfortunately full of hurt. Hope you are well and sobriety is getting easier. Missed you:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    A good example of hurt and pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by nicole

    I really like this one

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveAndAddictions

    Hey i just wanted to say that i love all your peoms they hit home with me. i was a coke addict for a good 3 years. most of my poems are based on my rough patches with coke. and the ups and down. i just wanted to thank you for your writing. reading your peoms kept my mind off of coke and your peoms put me in the mood to write so i would write more instead of doing coke. i have never met you only ever commented back and forth. but you have help me so much with your writing. i have been sober from coke for 3 months now <3 lots of love and endless thanks
    xoxo-KS

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Thanks u have no ideal how good ur comment means to me I KEEP hopeing
    that my poems hits someone in a postive way and makes them stop using really
    thanks cy

  • 16 years ago

    by nicole

    I finally read it. ilike it alot!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    I love this

  • 16 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hey This poem is awesome. Its shows me that all around us is where are demons are Not made up things or like you said "Don't Seep Through The floor" This poem has made me think about who my demons might be really liked it keep up wthe good work loved it!
    Ains
    ps. comment and rate back

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Very Blunt I really like it! Another 5/5 from me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Morticia

    Wow. Amazing. And so true. 5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Zach

    Excellent rhyming, this poem is smooth, fluent and captivating at the same time.
    keep up the good work 5/5 for sure.

  • 15 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Freakin great poem. wow. i liked this one alot!! this is the total truth. great poem. 5/5 keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by Steph

    Wow... completely true! every word!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Absolutely amazing. =]
    5/5. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...I really loved this poem, honest and personal, it was like I could feel the emotions you wrote this one with. I always love when I can feel them :) This one is very true, the worst demons are the ones that we let walk right through our front doors. Great job

    ~*Angel*~

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow this was a very emotional piece. it was so powerful and just really showed the truth of how no one is ever what they seem and the people we usually care about are the people who land up hurting us and wishing we were dead because being dead seems like the best thing to be. i loved this piece, it really made me think about someone i know. great job, i loved it!!!! take care, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This was awesome. I got the meaning if it. This was great. 5/5 loved it!