The Man with Wings

This was different but effective. I liked your word choice used it was deep powerful and held such strong emotions. This was an amazingly written poem which I think you wrote amazingly. Well done another good one from you~mel

Effective poem with really good words choice.
It reveals your emotions with a great metaphor.
5/5

Diffrent yet intriguging, really well written, the word choice is simple yet effective. the emtion was clear, and strong, the flow was a little off in some places, but I still give it 5/5 Try reading the poem outloud to yourself and you might be able to fix the flow with adding or removing one or two words. Keep up the good work

I liked it. It was different and interesting. It also had nice word choice. But the flow was a little off. I gave it a 5/5.