Place for Poetry

by RetroRavey   Jun 7, 2007


A place in the night

poetry bleeds from the wound
you give me inspiration.

Take my heart
and use the blood
as ink.

I'm not signing away
my soul
or my poetry.
I'm letting you see
what all you do to me.

This is my pain.

My love has grown ever deeper
because you let me
have my poetry.

A place in the night

the only one
where I can sing my soul to sleep
with

poetry.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. i love this poem.. its very orginal i've never read a poem like it before.. the flow was nice and the word choice was simple but still your emotion shined through strong... an enjoyable read :]P

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This piece endears me completely. The sentiments you portrayed in this work were earnestly genuine and heartfelt. (I quite liked it.) You've written a fine overstatement, I dare say. Nice work, nonetheless. =) --Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I found this quite...
    Overdramatic.
    But then that's why they call it poetry.
    Lol.
    Honestly?
    I kind of liked it.
    Your first stanzas were kind of eccentric.
    But your ending was great.
    I loved your format.
    I love structure.
    Lol.
    All in all, dear?
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I'm not usually interested in poems that have a style written like this but this poem was just wow truely amazing. Your words were deep and capturing. Im sure so many people can relate to this. Well done an enjoyable read~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Poems are an outlet for me too and sometimes the only way i can say surtent things. I liked this poem alot. I gave it a 5/5.

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