Love it

Tight!!! i luv it,keep writing!!

~Izi~
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Nice! Like the way it ends, it's different, than what you would expect! Keep it up.
xxx

How very amusing this piece is.

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You should be proud! Heh.
All the best and take care

Haha i like your poem..and your style! ..i've read some of your other poems ...there so good ..like i said like your style!
-alicia

Wow.. this made me laugh. Your style is amazing! Watch your spelling, though. =] This is wicked funny.
Best wishes!!

Interesting! Takes me back to when I used to play some of the old nintendo games! 5/5

Interesting...this is definitely something different than anything I've read before. I do like the way it's set up for the ending which is slightly surprising yet looking back perfect for this piece. Refreshing content. It only shows that anything can be a topic.
~Faith-less

Haha. I love it. In the second stanza, second line I think you mean from not for and in the last stanza, last line it should be buy*. sorry..you corrected mine so I wanted to correct yours. haha.

I love it! and you!
-Tar- [[Baby]]

Excellent!
I love the Mario games, especially the racing cart one for DS
You've done an amazing job on this! All hail weird ideas!! lol
5/5
*Gem*

This is interesting one.. L:-DL. Isn't like nobody would do it, but I am glad u was bored to write it. This is kute to read and make everyone want to play da game.. U r interesting guy, sorry if I put it out in kind. Hahaha

Lol good job...very creative wouldn't ever think of something like that

LMAO! I love your take on this :D
Reminds me of one of my friend's who's crazy about mario, she'll love this =D

Lol.. random much? but fix some of the grammar

Iused to play Mario all the time,,, I loved it 5/5()()()()()()()

Very original and unique
Great job
=]

I loveed it.
except shouldn't it be "from" and not "for"
in the second line of the second stanza.

eesh, i really like it
it was a great read for a boring computer class (:

keep writing.
laurie.