Waiting...

by Amanda Cleveland   Jun 8, 2007


A tear falls
cause im still waiting
then they all fall
and this pain im hating

I barly get through the nights
when the moom is the only light i find
seems like 24/7
your the only thing on my mind

i wanna forget what we had
atleast for a while
but the thing is
i cant forget my smile

I wouldnt be waiting
if you felt the same
so i guess since i lost
i better stop playin the game

when its all said and done
atleast i can say
i love everything about you
in everysingle way

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  • 15 years ago

    by MARI

    I really like this poem you expressed ur feeling really well and people can totally relate!!
    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    But the thing is
    i cant forget my smile

    i love that line - i know exacty what you mean!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittane

    Wonderfully written.
    ;[ I hate waiting.
    Me=[StillWaiting].
    Great
    great
    great
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is great writing - can totally relate to the whole "can't forget my smile" part. nice job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Aww, me too.