BROKEN HEARTED

by Madddiii   Jun 8, 2007


Broken hearted,
left to cry.
words unspoken,
throat is dry.
your smell,
nolonger lingers.
or the soft touches,
of your fingers.
so say goodbye,
and close the door.
I know you dont love me anymore

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  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Whaa it's small
    but it says enough
    it describes everything you're feeling and i really really love it. Also love the ending, it's very outspoken and clear.
    Really L O V E it !!:)
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Its beautifull :) i gave it 5/5 even tho its short it has a lot of emotion in it. i really enjoyed reading this poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I really like the form and structure of this.
    the short sharp lines are powerfull, and a few words manage to encase a larger meaning and emotion. really enjoyed reading this

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