Dearly departed

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 8, 2007


People, people every where
a little blood over there
some on the floor
some on the seiling

yet I'm still kneeling
to the casket of a suicide
former friend
former love
only if i had that chance to tell the love i found in you
how much you meant to me

and some thing stupid came over you and took you
took what was in you

so with this poem
shall i express my self
for the love i found you

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very cute and well expressed. The word "seiling" is misspelled. It should be ceiling. Well its great 5/5. Keep the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Your writting about such a dark topic for somebody who's so young with so much life ahead of them. Don't worry about the hard times in life, they'' always open your eyes to the good stuff you weren't paying attention to. Great work 5/5

More Poems By bleeding limegrenn