A dream, i dream

by bleeding limegrenn   Mar 3, 2008


I'm standing on a roof top
looking down as a crowd sters
with a pistol by my side
i am ready to say my final good-byes.
good-bye to my lover who i never loved
good-bye to the broken household i called home,
and one final good-bye to the friends who berated me
with that i cock the pistol by my side
the crowd is motionless now
i pull the cold dead trigger
then i wake up in a cold sweat,
it was just a dream

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nina09

    WOW! this is really good! I like it keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by MadisonMetamorphosis

    Love this poem, still :]

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Awesomly written. Short but excelent, keep it up.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MadisonMetamorphosis

    Dangg that's pretty deep.
    You worded it like perfectly.
    I like this piece a lott.
    Keep the good work up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    Great poem... just saw one thing... instead of sters, it's stirs... great idea for the poem though man :)

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