Demon Eye
by Simple Sensation Jun 9, 2007
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The cold stares. The cold glares. |
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16 years ago
Short and nicely arranged...a very good poem and quite dark ;) keep it up
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16 years ago
Well written i this one it is very dark which me like
keep it up
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16 years ago
by Fsams
Im just a little skeptical about the chunk "you intent is to kill.". I know you mean to say your intention is to kill. Even if you write "your intention is to kill" it would be nice with no problem in the flow. This piece is nice and the close rhymes are really catching.
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16 years ago
by Jessica
Ooh wow. This was very chilling. The flow was good and I loved the rhyme scheme you used. It was very unique and looked quite difficult. The descriptions as were the rhymes. ALthoguh in some spots I did feel it was a little bit awkward but thats to be expected with that type of scheme. Other than that, great job. 5/5
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16 years ago
by Boy
Aha. its ryming scheme was great. it was short but you showed alot of thisgs in few lines. and my friend this is called talent.
and i have noticedthat you have great talent.
thats why i will must give you 5/5
