I am me, let me fly free

Lol, so cute!

Very unique poem... I like the ending, your repetition of words:-I am me- first leaves bad impression on me, but than I read it once again I can say that you created powerful atmosphere.
I am maria,-I don't like this line it isn't effective like the rest of this piece.
Anyway great poem, with very original wording and excellent rhythm! It deserves 5/5

I really like this even if you don't know what it means.

This is good short and contradicting (in a good way) i like it it is kinda myterious which is awesome lol thx for the comment

keenan

You are begininng to understand that things dont have to make sense to be beautiful.
You are using your soul.
you are a poet.
You are beautiful.
maria, maria, maria.
The girl with the beautiful soul.